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UDAR’s editorial style guide is a blend of older UC Berkeley-specific style choices and other sources, many of which are outdated. We are transitioning to the Merriam-Webster Dictionary and the Associated Press Stylebook, the university’s preferred guides. This online guide covers editorial issues that are common in advancement communications, including academic terms, Athletics guidelines, university references, and bias-free language.

Administrative Style and Usage

Email Best Practices

SUBJECT HEADERS
Keep the subject short, around three to five words.

Use words that spark curiosity. Emojis can help readers notice the email in their inbox, but don’t overuse them.

Don’t use words such as free or sale in subject headers; they can get flagged as spam by the recipient’s email client.

PREHEADER TEXT
This short text can either expand upon the subject line or summarize your email. It shows up in the email preview window.

Subject: Chancellor Lyons’ Berkeley Brief
Preheader Text: A week of wows

If you don’t include custom preheader text, readers will see part of the first sentence. For example: Every October, six Nobel Prizes are awar

The full sentence is, “Every October, six Nobel Prizes are awarded to an individual or group for their groundbreaking contributions to a specific field,” but it got cut off in the space allowed. You may need to adjust the length of the first sentence. In addition, the screen size, web browser, and other factors can also affect what shows up as preheader text. Consider including preheader text to avoid repetition, cutoff sentences, or confusion.

Make sure the subject line and preheader text align with the email’s content to help avoid being flagged as spam.

BODY TEXT

When appropriate, include at least one link or call to action at the top of the email.

Try to keep emails focused on one subject or call to action.

Use short sentences and paragraphs of three to four sentences max.

Use subheadings or bullet points to break up longer text.

ALT TEXT
Alt text (alternative text) is text that describes an image or graphic so that it is accessible to all users. Some browsers display alt text if an image fails to load. Use precise terms such as “photo of…,” “painting of…,” or “13th-century woodcut of…” to provide helpful context. Most screen readers stop reading alt text after 125 characters, so keep it as descriptive as possible, but not too long.

Address Formats

EMAIL
Lowercase email addresses. Do not omit the period when it falls at the end of a sentence.

WEB ADDRESSES
Do not omit the period when a web address falls at the end of a sentence. When linking text to a URL in a digital publication, such as an email or web page:

  • Do not include: http:// or www.
    • BigGive.berkeley.edu
    • berkeley.edu/campus-life
  • Do not link text such as: click here or here.
  • Make link texts descriptive: Purchase your guests’ tickets on the commencement website.

Do not capitalize the b in berkeley.edu.

MAIL
Use the standard format as defined by the university’s mail services department.

Optional name and title: Jane Doe, Director
Optional subunit name: Office of Gift Planning
Department name: University Development and Alumni Relations
University name: UC Berkeley (or spell out in formal instances)
Address: 1995 University Ave., Suite 401
City/State/ZIP+4: Berkeley, CA 94704-1058

In some cases, an event name may replace a person’s name

Event name: Big Give
Department name: University Development and Alumni Relations
University name: UC Berkeley (or spell out in formal instances)
Address: 1995 University Ave., Suite 401
City/State/ZIP+4: Berkeley, CA 94704-1058

In most cases, collateral from Cal Athletics requires a different address. See Athletics Style Guidelines.

Copyright and Trademark Information

All printed and electronic materials produced at the university are copyrighted by the UC Regents. While it is not required by law, a copyright notice is always good to include.

  • Copyright 2025 UC Regents (or © 2025 UC Regents) | All rights reserved

The university seal and other symbols such as the Cal script and some images of Oski are trademarked.

Licensing questions? Email brand@berkeley.edu.

Phone and Fax Numbers

The main phone number for UDAR is 510.642.1212.

The main fax number is 510.642.8969.